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Start a project with Nontraditional! Mentor:
Nontraditional
Accepted at: Harvard HBS
Industry Exp: Banking, Engineering, Finance, Military
Gender: Male
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   My background allowed me to tell a somewhat different story on my application essays. I came out of the maritime industry where I spent several years as a crewmember on commercial vessels and then worked in management. I was also in the Naval Reserve for eight years. I believe I can add perspective to those who do not come out of the "traditional" MBA applicant mold. Everyone has valuable experiences, and what will set you apart is the ability to tell a compelling story about how those lead you to business school. I was a round 2 admit in 2006. I had put in a hastily prepared application in round 3 the year before and received valuable feedback from the admissions office for my 2006 effort. I was able to learn a great deal from admissions about what they look for when selecting admits from a sea of qualified applicants.

Start a project with trump! Mentor:
trump
Accepted at: LBS
Industry Exp: Accounting, Consulting, Finance
Gender: Male
Background: India
 
Mentor Details:   An applicant's biggest strength is his/her ability to demonstrate quality work experience. I had less than 4 years of work experience (at a Big4 accountancy firm) at the time of admission and my biggest hurdle was to explain to the admissions committee what I had to offer to the class with an average work experience of 6 years. Also, coming from a competitive demography, it becomes important to distinguish yourself from the rest of the applicants from the same pool. Looking forward to working with you.

Start a project with top20bschoolexpert! Mentor:
top20bschoolexpert
Accepted at: Duke Fuqua
Industry Exp: Computer Related, Consulting, Entrepreneurship, Finance, Non Profit, Private Equity, Technology, Venture Capital
Gender: Male
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   I'm currently a second year student at the Fuqua School of Business. I have always had a passion for helping others advance their careers, and I want to help you so you can shine among other qualified applicants. Having recently gone through the application process, I can help you identify your strengths and weaknesses and improve your chance of getting into the school of your choice! I have edited numerous essays and resumes for my friends applying to top business schools. I'd like to help you as well. I am an excellent storyteller and will do my best to help you articulate (and integrate) your stories through your essays. I have a unique mix of background in strategy consulting, venture capital, social entrepreneurship, and Internet start-up.

Start a project with lgelblum! Mentor:
lgelblum
Accepted at: UC Berkeley Haas
Industry Exp: Finance, Non Profit
Gender: Female
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   Hello! I am in my first year at Haas School of Business pursuing a dual MBA / MPH. I am originally from the Bay Area. I studied International Economics as an undergrad and played #1 singles on Georgetown's D-1 Tennis team. At Georgetown, I was also involved in the Jewish student association and interfaith dialogue groups as well as being a peer mentor and economics TA. I love travelling and had awesome study abroad experiences in the Dominican Republic and Hungary. During college, I mainly worked in the NGO space, in roles including advocacy, research, and analysis. After college I worked at a middle-market investment bank in Miami for two years, focusing mainly on healthcare and technology. I then transferred to the company's San Francisco office and spent another 1.5 years as an Associate in technology and clean technology banking . I am now enrolled in the dual MBA / MPH program and interested in pursuing a career in biotech or global health strategy / finance.

Start a project with Anna! Mentor:
Anna
Accepted at: Wharton
Industry Exp: Consulting, Entrepreneurship, Finance, Government, Non Profit, Technology
Gender: Female
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   I received my MBA at Wharton in 2009. As a member of the Graduate Admissions Committee I evaluated applications and conducted interviews. I have very strong writing skills (majored in English and Political Science undergrad). Before business school I worked for a management consulting firm and a nonprofit international policy think tank. I am particularly good at helping applicants hone their story, portray their experiences in a compelling manner, and address questions that will likely arise in the minds of those on the admissions committee.

Start a project with MBAAdmit! Mentor:
MBAAdmit
Accepted at: Chicago Booth School of Business
Industry Exp: Accounting, Banking, Consulting, Finance
Gender: Female
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   Congratulations on making the decision to pursue your MBA! I am a 2008 University of Chicago grad and have been consulting on MBA admissions in New York and Chicago as an independent consultant. My specialty is combining my business and international background, admissions experience and writing abilities to develop an admission package that isn’t just written right, but written right for an MBA admissions committee. My credentials include: • MBA from University of Chicago Booth Graduate School of Business • BBA in Finance from Indiana University, Kelley School of Business • Admitted to top business schools during my own MBA admission process • Currently providing admission consulting to MBA applicants through own business • Prior involvement with MBA admissions and interviews • Published writer and editor • Background in financial services and consulting with work experience in the United States and Middle East.

Start a project with WhartonMBA10! Mentor:
WhartonMBA10
Accepted at: Wharton
Industry Exp: Banking, Entrepreneurship, Finance, Health Services and Health Care, Private Equity
Gender: Male
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   Professional writer + Wharton MBA '10 = Success! Before Wharton I worked in the Public Relations industry and drafted hundreds of press releases. I have the professional business writing background needed to help you develop the best essays for all top MBA programs.